Writing Task 1

Assalamu'alaikum wr. wb.


Today i'd like to share some of my writing' practices in ms. Siska's class.
Writing task 1

Day 1

 

Revise:

The table indicates the six major cities’ underground railway system about their releasing date, distance of route, and amount of passenger each year.

Overall, six cities had different features of each railway system. The latest system in Los Angeles was in the fifth position regarding kilometers of route and a few passengers each year while the oldest railway system with the longest route was in London.

The newest railway system which was opened in 2001 by having distance 28km. It was also carrying only 50 millions passengers each year, more or less 39 times higher than the railway system in Tokyo was released in 1927 and covered 155km.

The Washington DC underground railway system with 126km of route was below the length of Tokyo’s, Paris’ and London’s by 155km, 199km and 394km respectively. The most extensive passengers each year were found in Tokyo with 1928 million passengers compared to only 45 million passengers each year in Tokyo.

Day 2

 

Revise:

The table illustrates about activities in different countries.

Overall, Australians, Korean and Americans take all parts of favorites activities, while Japanese only interested in reading.

It can be seen from the table that Canadians, Australians, and Americans have same interest about 60% in watching television, while Korean and Chinese have lower precentages of this activityonly 22% and 15%. on the other hand, Korean, Chinese along with Japanese prefer to read books as their favorite activity to spend leisure time around 60%, 60% and 62% respectively. Both 30% people of Australia and America enjoy their free time to go to beach rather than reading books. In contrast, it is around 23% onlyAmerican who often enjoy listen to the music while other counties are only 3% of average.

In addition, all of the countries written in table that are indicated to read books rather than spending their free time to sleep in age 30 to 50 years old.

I'd like to say thanks a bunch to ms. Siska for giving me many advices and positive feedback.

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Wassalamu'alaikum wr. wb.